Thursday, 1 September 2011

Friday Fiction Flash





Amy C at Romance Book Wyrm and Dottie atTink's Place have come up with the idea for a Monday Morning Flash Fiction challenge. Each Monday a new picture prompt will be posted and if you choose to participate - you publish your Fiction Flash  on Friday - 350 words, give or take. Below you can find the picture posted last Monday:




What could be done? I had to write a new story! I promise it will be relatively short and I will try to finish it.

Nothing was better than great golden oaks growning among enchanted fields. They were home of so many animals that every hunter, seeing one, was almost sure of a catch. It was practically a matter of when rather than if. Verran, seeing one, smiled. It was late but not too late - all she had to do was to get closer, prepare some snares, find a comfortable bough and wait.

She went hunting to relax and distract her attention from the problems surrounding her like the thick folliage of that majestic monster of a tree. It was time for her to get married. She didn't wish to do so but her mother has already found a suitable man and chose the date. Tomorrow. Verran had no say in it unless she committed herself to a lifelong service of the Goddess. She didn't want to do that either. Priestesses couldn't hunt and rarely travelled for one thing and she enjoyed every moment of it. 

A white squirrel run past her snare. Verran smiled. She wanted to impress her family for the last time and catch something  bigger and more dangerous so squirrel was definitely safe tonight. Small animals were just for children or beginners. She close her eyes and focused. She saw a dark shape among the leaves, way above her. A black panther. It was it - a prey worth her skills, as dangerous and canny as herself.

She centered all her attention on that beautiful, nimble predator, drawing it to her with elven mesmer powers, luring it into approaching her snare. The cat looked straight into her eyes and she felt an unexpected pang of grief. The animal was so luscious and graceful. Saddened by her own deadly plans - how pathetic it sounded? She was falling apart but despite her anger at herself she decided to save the pather's life. Yes, she will return home with empty hands and her head hung low in shame, her fierce pride making her blush. She will cry while agreeing with her mother's final argument for marrying her off- her being not really good for anything else.

A sudden shimmer of air and a wave of heat made her look up. The panther was sitting right above her, far more comfortable than any wild animal had a right to be facing another predator. She heard his voice in her head. A voice without words, just images and suggestions. Let's not return. Let's go to the mountains, hunt together and get away from it all. Let's keep only each other's company. Let's terrorize smaller animals around and share hot, fresh meat of the victims.Verran smiled although there were tears in her eyes.  She said aloud: "agreed" and the cat understood her instantly, purring with content, rubbing against her shoulder. She followed it out of the tree and towards the mountains, as happy as a lark.




15 comments:

  1. Nice story. I like the addition of the panther. It showed some human-ness with her display of compassion for it and now as a companion. I also love the photo, the golden blades of grass with the sun beaming down. Really nice.

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  2. I can't imagine anyone wanting to kill a beautiful cat. I'm glad your heroine didn't have to!

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  3. Thanks, this week I published early because I am going to be rather busy over the weekend. I am glad that my slightly more optimistic story was likeable! I would hate Verran if she killed the panther!

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  4. I usually do not like other stories before I have written my own but I just could not stay away :D

    Is the panther gonna eat her when she falls asleep? Ohhhh or it is a shifter and they live happily ever after?= ;)

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  5. Umm...not telling? I did toy with an idea of making this panther a shapeshifter of a kind. Will see (or not). Thanks for a visit despite my false start, Blodeuedd!

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  6. Yeah for prompting and writing. I could always write with a prompt in English class. This was a little fun picture and wow for the story :) Good job!

    Black Disaster Fairy

    A World of Personality

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  7. Thanks Black Disaster Fairy, prompting does help!

    By the way what an interesting moniker!

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  8. shifter, shifter, shifter! Lol

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  9. @ Blodeuedd
    Hmmm...if I am able to continue - who knows? However, be careful what you wish for...

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  10. Well, I'm glad she gets to travel the path she wants to, whether the panther turns out to be a shifter or not.

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  11. I am glad you liked the solution, carol! Thanks for a visit!

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  12. Wait.... what???? I know it isn't finished, but right now you have an HEA and a possible romance. *faints* ;)

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  13. It's too early to say anything about an HEA or romance but indeed, I might take that twist just to see you fainting once again! * ana hides behind a big wall and cackles*

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  14. Very nice! Seems like neither of us where happy with our mothers this week. he he.

    I do like the panther. I want more of these two!

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